by: emzstahh
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Concluded points from my twitter feedback:
- I was very into it when I was in the cornrows as I looked much more comfortable
- The black and white theme worked very well with the concept.
- Bed parts were amazing, 'briliant' to be precise!
- The transitions from one scene to another worked well
CRITICISMS:
- Angie shouldn't of wore white
- Emily could have been more enthusiastic with her actions
- It should have contained more of an emotional aspect, for example a teardrop
- The chorus should have contained a variety of different shots
The other three responses that were filmed for our feedback was accidently left out when uploading them. But they are available on the other blogs from my group members.
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