The Pitch (Overall Feedback)

Overall Feedback

Well the feedback for our pitch in today's lesson was quite good actually. We covered all the points that we needed to cover as a group. Our pitch was thorough and it outlined everything that we were doing exactly. However, Louisa did mention that on our 'Locations' section of our Prezi it wasn't that clear. We mentioned on the Prezi that we would film on a street but we didn't go in-depth about what kind of street we wanted; it being for example a calm quiet road or a busy road with a lot of people walking on it. Louisa really made a valid point because different roads really have different meanings so for an example, Brick Lane could represent an urban flavour. Mary also made another valid point in deciding what road to film on as she mentioned that we should consider if the road we'd be filming on would fit into the 'theme' of our video. Furthermore, if we do film on a main road hypothetically speaking, we'd need to consider the general public, the shops in the background and if they relate to the song and so on. 

As mentioned from above Brick Lane has such a 'raw' edge to it as it is like a congregation of multi-ethnic people coming together as one. I haven't been there so I wouldn't exactly know the feeling of being there and experiencing what I see visually but I can definitely tell that there is something special about it!

Camden Town is known for having all people that society classes as 'freaks' which I think is totally wrong in my eyes. I think that Camden Town will be awfully busy to film a scene on as a lot of people tend to visit Camden Town. 

On the other side of busy Camden Town you have the peaceful, quiet Camden Lock, which up to this date I totally forgot about! I think that this will be a perfect location because like I said, its quiet, peaceful and not many people go there. If we are lucky to catch Camden Lock on a sunny day the Lock itself is literally beautiful as the water sparkles. I just think its really nice. Maybe instead of filming on a 'Plain Old' street we could film our ending scene on Camden Lock. I will definitely talk to the group about this choice! 

Due to the fire alarm going off in today's lesson, I was unable to upload the video of my group presenting our pitch. But I shall upload it next week so it can be viewed! :)