PLANNING - Feedback from Pitch

Despite the struggle we experienced to actually complete the prezi for the pitch, we recieved a lot of positive feedback.  A member of the class said it was 'very detailed', 'explained everything' and was 'the best prezi he had ever seen.'  Although our pitch was long compared to the other groups, it was better this way, because it was more in depth and explained things clearly.  Louisa gave us one bit of critiscm as she thought that we hadn't explained our locations thoroughly enough and it was unclear.  It was understandable because we referred to one location as 'a busy street' rather than stating the actual name of the street we wanted to film on.  

The others in the group had said they were looking for a busy road to film on, and small discussions were made about filming on one of the roads near my house, because that's where we were filming the rest of the video.  I disagreed as I think there are nicer venues in London than the ones in my area.  Mary also said that we should think carefully about what street we film on as it might not fit the rest of the video's image or theme.  I personally don't think we should film on a 'busy road', I would rather it be an area with water in the background like Royal Victoria Dock or Southbank - I'll be discussing this with the rest of the group.